and 3 more from lembeh and yap

a pair of clowns, a pinkie and a nice nudie:

you can can find a small flash based slideshow here:

flash slideshow

and links to the others here

i'd appreciate comments and feedback from all of you, good, bad or constructive

Beautiful stuff, Paul. I've sent you some Id's. Really enjoyed your galleries.

Cheers,

Marli

These are great shots so I will critique on a very high and nitpicky level.

1. I like the exposure and composition but it is still looking down, not sure if it was possible but imagine it more staight on with the mouths open like that. The upper right should be cloned out it is a little distracting. But for a shot taken looking down it is very very good.

2. I love this one the best. I would like to see a smidge more space on the end of the at the right but this is a killer pic, just perfect exposure and great negative space.

3. I like the exposure and negative space, it is well exposed and has a great saturated look. Not really related to the critique but personally I like a pic to be able to be understood by not U.W people. Even if they have no idea what they are looking at they can tell something is a creature. This pic is kind of like "what the hell is that" if you showed a non diving relative or something. But for an UW guy I like it.

-Steve

steve, thanks for the constructive input and advice on all three sets