Second Set of Shots

Thanks to the advice form here and a different Mask, my second round of pictures are better (I think). Judge for yourself and let me know what you think (good and bad). Thanks

PS - See THIS POST for the first batch

Thanks,

J.C.

Any feedback? Constructive criticism? C'mon I can take it, don't be shy

IMO the second batch looks significantly better. I guess it just goes to show what a little practice and sound advice can do. Keep shooting.

Thanks. I'm gearing up to try wide-angle which I know will be much more challenging. But hey, it wouldn't be fun if it was too easy.

IMHO the level of exposure and the focus is better on the whole

expect more "fun" as there are always more challenges in photography !!

looks much better actually.

Still a bit of backscatter though, try keeping your strobes parallel to the lens port

Thank you.

Expore different angles when you shoot, take a few from one, then another then another, from the top, looking up, etc, then you can choose the best when you are looking at them on your computer. Also take a few, some times the first is not as sharp, so by taking more than one you have a better chance of getting a good one