moving nemo

opinion needed...

thanks

amir stern

I really like the concept, Amir. However, it is too centred and has a lot of negative space. It also appears to be underexposed. If shot in RAW, you can adjust this. I used levels and upped the brightness in Photoshop before cropping to a vertical format. I also used a tiny bit of unsharp mask. Hope you like it. I think it has more impact, and you focus on the face now.

Cheers,

Marli

Great concept.

I like what Marli has done too. I also wonder whether you could have a go at adjusting the white balance so the white band on nemo is actually white rather than blue. Just a thought.

Great as is tho.

You mean like this?

Nice concept, but it has more impact in a vertical orientation, and with the fish filling the frame a tad more, as shown in Marli's edit. Also, a bit more strobe power would have brought up the white on the clownfish and gotten better colour contrast and saturation.

Exactly what I had in mind Matt.

actually orangefin anemonefish has a natural blue tinge to its white band...

Thanks Mike - learn something every day from you!

Thank you all!

i can see thet you like the concept..

next time will be better..

thanks

amir