Fantastic! I like! More of the moray is in focus and the highlight on the teeth and dark tones in the eyes is a nice touch. I think mixing the angle of the moray in your first shot with this portrait view would have made this great photograph a tiny bit better. The shadow on the head is a little distracting though. (I'm just being a pain in the a## perfectionist--don't mind me)
Not at all - that is the goal of my next Green Moray find. One of the reasons I posted the first one rather than the second one. The second one to me has that annoying shadow on his head and is like 100's of other Moray shots I and others take. Yes it is a good shot, but nothing exceptional.
Please understand I am not bashing your work. It's a great shot and I am only giving you my honest PERSONAL critique. I am not trying to take away from this great set of photos.
Laz, I am looking for this sort of critique. That is why I posted it in this forum and not in the "Members Photo" forum with the title "Look at the cool Moray shots"
Knowing that you publish your work now the question becomes.. are you willing to let the implications of this picture reach the masses? I know terror and fear sell but you're really portraying the moray as some kind of fearsome predator, which we all know it is not. If it was, I'd doubt it if any of us ('cept James Watt) would get 4 inches away from its mouth. Sorry Paul, gotta throw in a little environmentalist trick question in there.

Ah, but it is a fearsome predator. Have you ever seen one of these things hunt - nasty, quick and violent. Is it dangerous to us? Well not unless you do something stupid it isn't - but if you are a fish then this is a dangerous beast.
The cleaner shrimp idea would certainly do exactly what you said - and I need both images for my library.
As always I'll keep my eye out for the opportunity - and having an idea of the kind of shot I am looking for makes working with a subject so much easier as I can now go in with a specific idea of the shot I want.
Lastly, yes I have focus lights built into my two strobes. I use them pretty liberally when it is low light and they certainly can help the autofocus. Just at this distance, the difference between being in focus and out of focus is so small that a tiny movement will screw up the autofocus. I'm determined to get the manual focus stuff workijng today.
Thanks to you and everyone for the critique so far - don' stop now - I'd love to hear more.
M