On the advice of another member, I re-mixed my BORING "test footage" into something with a little more spice. It's shot with a Sony VX2000 in a Gates housing using the Fathom super-wide port, no video lights, in about 20 FT (6 m) of water at 16:00 (early evening). I used iMovie to put it all together. It runs less than 3 minutes. This is my FIRST attempt at combining video and music.
Cut quicker. There are no rules about this but try 3 to 7 seconds per shot unless something really interesting is going on. Mix up some medium and close shots with your wide footage. Get close in on those divers and that bus. Shows us what's inside the bus through the windows.
White balance is also a bit too red, not just on the diver's torches.
Love a bit of Zeppelin...
Actually looks pink on the lights. are you using a green water filter?