Help me pick one ...

Which one do you guys like better? Gonna print one of these two and hang in the office ...

A.

... OR ...

B.

Any other contructive criticism or advice more than welcome!

Thanks!

To me the second one have more an history to tell. The first is more on the abstract side... so the second one.

My preference is for the second image.

It's a good one, and one I wouldn't mind having it on the wall of my office.

Ellen

Hi Jeremy,

You might think about version C. If you crop B so you still see the whole face and a little less of the bottom where nothing is really going on? You might try about an inch off the right and an inch off the bottom and see what you think. It would still tell the story. My 2 cents.

Steve

Hi Jeremy,

 

You might think about version C. If you crop B so you still see the whole face and a little less of the bottom where nothing is really going on? You might try about an inch off the right and an inch off the bottom and see what you think. It would still tell the story. My 2 cents.

 

Steve

That could be the trick! I'll play with that idea.

Others may disagree, but it looks to me like the cannon could use a little help to boost the color. Perhaps I over do it!