!st attempt at u/w fashion shoot

A few shots from this morning - C&C appreciated!

I think that the second shot is strongest; the first has a strange alien on the model's nose. However, this style is getting too formulaic in my opinion. I have just seen so much of the same thing. If it sells for you, however, great!

Cheers,

Marli

wow!

Great stuff for a first attempt!

"C&C appreciated!" - keeping this in mind,

First one is so-so.

2nd one is really nice! I love the concept and the model does it really well! I'd dodge the sheet in the left corner to make the lighting even.

the 3rd one is a great composition but I'd re run the photo editing, I think it would look great as a black and white with some detailed dodging/burning and luminosity adjustments and maybe even some air brushing on the model to give it that nice etheral look.

Really cool stuff!!!

Cal