Not bad I'd say for a first! The story is pretty cute, these are my cousins, the little one (Keila) thought I was Mary-Poppins, (I guess she thought the giant bag I keep my housing in was Mary-Poppins magic carpet bag
. Anyway, she didn't know how to swim and this was her first time underwater in a pool, she was afraid at first but wanted to 'impress' Mary-Poppins' so she gave it a go. By the end of the day she was swimming circles from me to my Aunt and back. Very cool stuff! Needs some color fixin', but thought I would share.