Craig,
I appreciate your message. I think this discussion is performing a useful service for anyone who is considering the AF-S 12-24 zoom lens, particularly until more manufacturers come out with clear advice as to which dome(s) the lens will work with and in what configuration.
Used with the FE2 dome, the 12-24 has certainly impressed me as a valuable tool for wide-angle work. I would say that it outperforms my 20 mm prime lens with the older SWB dome by a considerable margin.
Like you, I would not want people anyone discouraged from considering the AF-S due to premature judgments based in incomplete or inappropriate tests, but I agree completely that the matter of which domes and configurations (extension ring, diopter) work and don't work needs to be sorted out.
I'm not completely convinced that tests of the lens with a diopter are an accurate indication of underwater performance, given that in an above water test, the camera is shooting a grid in a flat plane, while underwater in a dome, the camera is actually shooting the virtual image, which is a section of a sphere.
In any event, I did some quick tests with the camera out of the housing and the +2 diopter mounted, at the closer subject distances you suggest. The camera was hand-held, so there probably some problems that are primarily due to my inability to hold the camera plane exactly parallel to the subject.
Test 2189 - 12-24 zoom w/ +2 diopter.
Zoom power: 24 mm.
Distance: approx. 30 cm/12' (subject to sensor plane - the front of the lens is approx. 17 cm./6.5" from the subject.

Test 2192 - 12-24 zoom w/ +2 diopter.
Zoom power: 12 mm
Distance: approx. 30 cm/12' (subject to sensor plane - the front of the lens is approx. 17 cm./6.5" from the subject.

Test 2194 - 12-24 zoom w/ +2 diopter.
Zoom power: 12 mm.
Distance [closest focus or near]: approx. 24 cm/9.5" (subject to sensor plane - the front of the lens is approximately 18 cm./7" from the subject).

Test 2198 - 12-24 zoom w/ +2 diopter.
Zoom power: 24 mm.
Distance [closest focus or near]: approx. 24 cm/9.5" (subject to sensor plane - the front of the lens is approximately 18 cm./7" from the subject).

I certainly see a degree of rectilinear distortion in these images, though I don't understand why the distortion is restricted to one side of the image in two of the examples - perhaps this is the result of my failure to hold the camera perfectly level.
Again, however, I think the level of distortion would be tolerable for most of the underwater subjects that I am likely to be shooting at very close focus distances with this lens underwater. And, as I said earlier, I'm not yet persuaded these tests are really indicative of what the performance through a dome underwater will be. I'll try to shoot some close tests in the pool the next time I have the 12-24 lens on the camera in the housing.
Robert Delfs