Sam, I use the stock K screens, which if I recall correctly is not that different from your P screen.
Not sure which part of the screen you're having issues with; I will confess that I use the ground glass as my primary focus cue when topside, and the split image when submerged. The microprism ring is useless for me.
I do not use any lens slower than f 2.8 when underwater, not sure what you're using. My experience is that faster lenses are way easier to focus. Years ago I took a Noct underwater, which was a religious experience, due to the incredible snappy focus and bright viewfinder.
A workmate had a Beattie screen. It was a bit brighter, but not enough to make a big impression (certainly not enough for me to buy one).
BTW, just thinking, how's your eyesight? The sportsfinder was designed for eye relief (several inches between the viewfinder and the eye) and has a closer apparent distance for the viewfinder image.
All the best, James